Audience feedback- Responses

Below is feedback in response to an audience feedback session I participated in during class. 

For my audience feedback, I made sure all the people asked were of my target demographic. I also asked my focus group in order to gain an idea of what multiple people had to say about my products. 

For my print product, the following advice was given- 

Price is missing
Selling line missing
Barcodes not exactly the same on both copies
Change subscribe offer in the cover as doesn't adhere to conventions

For my online product, the following advice was given-

include cutaways in the faux not fur video of the fashion industry
Maybe include Tour dates, link to buy tickets on Sam’s page, maybe a link to Emily’s video (with a disclaimer)


I will take on all this advice in order to meet the maximum appeal of my audience.